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I study
                                                                                     the surface of the moon,
                                              astronauts are touching
             her face.
©2009 ~Beaple
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Oh, boy.

(4 lines intended to be read left to right as well as top to bottom)

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I like this a lot - nice imagery and a great sense of space in the poem.

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Are the two different versions of the sentence obvious enough/too obvious?

I'm glad the space/distance came through, at least. Thank you!

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