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I saw you in the ocean, riding waves like seaweed leaves.
And you kept your arms in motion
kept waving out to me.
I blew a kiss goodbye,
and stayed to watch you leave.
For the tide's a perfect gentleman, he'll take you out to sea.
in the west she puts the sun to bed
in the east she watches as it wakes
I saw her behind a mountain, once
and again across a lake
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taken4granted07 Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
i love the vision you created.
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taken4granted07 Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
love how you created such a vivid vision.
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RhynWilliams Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2014   Traditional Artist
well done!
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lollirotcat Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2014  Student Writer
Love this!! Congrats on the DD! :D
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dartscapes Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2014  Professional Artist
Great images in your word choice!  Like the whimsy! ; )
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analillithbar Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Beautiful.
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lintu47 Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Congrats on the DD! :dalove:
Have a nice day! :party:
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beelzeboobs Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2014
Made me feel better <3
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DeriveAnemone Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Ahhh I love anything ocean-related and this is just beautiful! That last line. <3
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ashellessmind Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2013
murder poem,

except its not a poem, it's a song.
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