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Nouns taking turns being verbs.
I like the tempo of this a lot.
Special Features>Deleted Scenes>Alternate Ending:
night
falls
day
breaks
Special Features>Behind the Scenes>Making of Featurette:
Originally showed up in this journal (without the final two lines), written around the same time as this poem was edited down into its current/final form. Single word lines have been on my mind again lately (11/1/09), and this one in particular wouldn't leave me alone. It probably STILL won't.
I like the tempo of this a lot.
Special Features>Deleted Scenes>Alternate Ending:
night
falls
day
breaks
Special Features>Behind the Scenes>Making of Featurette:
Originally showed up in this journal (without the final two lines), written around the same time as this poem was edited down into its current/final form. Single word lines have been on my mind again lately (11/1/09), and this one in particular wouldn't leave me alone. It probably STILL won't.
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Long time since I came. I kinda like the alternate poem more.
Theres something so catchy about it.
Like an egg fell and broke. And now it's sunny side up =
Or also the sequence. after night falls, day breaks. But when something (like a vase) falls then it breaks. Natural order.
Theres something so catchy about it.
Like an egg fell and broke. And now it's sunny side up =
Or also the sequence. after night falls, day breaks. But when something (like a vase) falls then it breaks. Natural order.