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Literature Text
can
I
hold
your final breath inside your chest?
hand
over
your
mouth
so
you
can't
let
it
out.
I
hold
your final breath inside your chest?
hand
over
your
mouth
so
you
can't
let
it
out.
Apologies to the two of your who favorited the previous version. I decided to play with, and then agonize over, the spacing. I hope i made the "alternate" reading subtly obvious. I also had changed the words when I submitted it before (this began life as a comment on Meg's page [I don't remember how to link anymore, so I'll come back and fix this later]), but I changed them back for this one - for some reason I changed "can't" to "don't" and completely obliterated the "hand/can't" thing. Stupid.
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